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I made a bunch of corrections to your intro paragraph. Generally, your content is fine. You just need to work on mechanics such as word choice, avoiding the passive voice, and making sure all your sentences are clear and make complete sense.

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I made a bunch of corrections to your intro paragraph. Generally, your content is fine. You just need to work on mechanics such as word choice, avoiding the passive voice, and making sure all your sentences are clear and make complete sense.

 

Where did you make the edits?

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When we read the Odyssey we skipped a good 4/5 of the chapters and the end result was misery

 

Yeah last year my good English teacher didn't skip any chapters but my one this year skipped like 3 chapters like how can you do that to a piece of classic literature.

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reading this book or "poem" as my teacher calls it. Summary: it was boring as hell

 

it's an epic poem, and I actually enjoyed The Odyssey minus the annotation of each chapter. It has a good story and a lot of good deep meanings, if you didn't just jump on your class' bandwagon you'd realize it's actually a great book.

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